Unit 1 _ Task 3: Paraphrasing
“Without clear lines of communication, our ideas would stay within our own small development teams instead of becoming mature products. While this is obvious to those of us who have become experienced engineers, the real question is: Why is it lost to us when we are engineering students?”
Dr. Akbar R Khan, Software Systems Engineer, USA,
“Good Communication Is Essential...” (2014)
Paraphrase: ‘According to Dr Akbar R Khan, Good communication Is Essential, (2014), as an engineer student our thoughts will stay within our little group if we did not have clear channels of communication, rather than becoming developed products. While this is self-evident to those of us who have are skilled engineers for a long time, the genuine enquiry is: Why did we lose it as an engineering student?’
Hi Kris, a good job done by rephrasing the sentence structure, simplifying it.
ReplyDeleteGood effort on posting back a question to the reader.